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Fundraising Tuesday: Envelopes the Donor Will Open

January 26, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Did you get a lot of requests for donations in the mail last year? So did I. As a fundraiser, I’m glad to see all these envelopes, but as a donor, I’m overwhelmed!

I just held a ruler up to the stack of mail that arrived in November and December of 2020. It was more than six inches worth of paper.

envelopes

Taller than a coffee cup, for sure. But more powerful?

The power of the nonprofit message all depends on whether donors choose to open the envelope. Share on X

Direct Mail is You Against the World

Piles of envelopes coming through the mail: at home, we are used to that. As donors ourselves, we may have a routine: open the mail next to the recycling bin and pitch, pitch, pitch. Save that one for later. Pitch, pitch, pitch.

That includes the organizations we love and the organizations we’ve never heard of. The appeal letters are mixed in with the bills and the marketing mail. It’s all just a mass of paper, and the more we throw into the bin, the more we win.

We know that when we are at home, thinking like donors. But as soon as we put on our fundraising hats, we forget it.

Our nonprofit is so special, and its work is so important. Donors must be dying to see, open, and read everything we send them. Right?

Wrong. Our appeal letters are part of the pile, and it’s our direct mail against letters from everybody else in the world–until we do something that makes donors want to read them. Often, that’s the envelope.

Envelopes that Welcome Donors In

Research says that one of the best ways to get your mail to stand out from the pack is to send it in an oversized envelope. Whether that’s a full sheet of paper or a greeting card size, it immediately calls attention to itself.

Large envelopes

As you can see, some of these envelopes use graphics to differentiate themselves, too. That’s even more important if you’re sending appeal letters in regular business-sized envelopes. An envelope with graphics…

Envelopes with graphics

..or an envelope that IS a graphic!

Envelope all graphic

With or without a drawing or photo on the front, some envelopes beg to be opened because they have a compelling message there. CISPES says, “Trump is out but the struggle is far from over!” Don’t you want to open the envelope to find out what that mean, and what you can do about it?

Women for Women says, next to a photo of a woman carrying handmade blankets on her back, “I am the new definition of a business woman.”

Envelope with quotation

(The Task Force used a colorful first-class stamp, which catches the eye–and is known to get a better result than a nonprofit imprint.)

 

What did your nonprofit do in 2020 to make sure your envelope would get opened?

What will you do in 2021, now that you’ve looked at these examples?

 

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Fundraising Tuesday: What’s Your Campaign Story?

January 19, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

As Inauguration Day approaches, I think about the last two presidential elections. They had very different results–possibly because of the stories the campaigns told.

what happened coverAfter the disaster in 2016, both presidential candidate Hillary Rodham Clinton and seasoned campaign manager and Democratic National Committee operative Donna Brazile put books out trying to explain what happened. Too late!

 

campaign biographyLooking back at elections can teach us something, but there’s an equally if not more interesting kind of book to read: the kind that’s published before the election.

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Campaign stories that worked

Barack Obama’s The Audacity of Hope was a brilliant example. It told the story of who he was and made that the story of what we, the voters, wanted to see. It won him donations, volunteers, votes. It helped make him President.

Joe Biden’s Promise Me, Dad: A Year of Hope, Hardship, and Purpose focused on his family, and especially, the tragedies that they suffered. It turned the former Vice President from an Obama era afterthought to a candidate people could identify with. It helped make him President.

Kamala Harris book cover

The Truths We Hold: An American Journey introduced Senator Kamala Harris to an audience outside California. It has not made her President–yet–but it helped many more people get to know, like, and trust her, and what she stands for. It probably helped make her Vice President.

There’s an election campaign going on, and your nonprofit organization is one of the candidates.

You’re competing for volunteer time.  You’re competing for donor money.

Everyone in your community can choose from a slate of good causes and “cast their vote”–for you, for a similar organization, or for a completely different cause that also appeals to them.

You need name recognition to win.  No one will vote for you if they don’t know who you are.  But how do you make sure people hear about you, and remember your name?

Tell stories.

Tell stories that dramatize the problem you’re trying to solve.

Tell stories that give people hope that there are solutions.

Give them a chance to be the hero of the story by giving you their time or money.

When they choose between you and other organizations, make sure they know your name.  Then you’ll have a chance to get their vote.

Happy Inauguration Day 2021.

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TY Thursday: Can an Email Attachment Really be a Thank-You?

January 14, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Email attachmentDoes an attachment to an email message take the place of a thank-you letter?

When you give money to causes you support, often the nonprofit sends you a response by email right away.

This seems appropriate. The nonprofit wants to go beyond the impersonal receipt that automatically goes out when you give online. They want you to know as soon as possible not just that my gift was received, but that it was appreciated. That’s part of how they hope to win your loyalty as a donor!

When you give, you often receive a thank-you letter in the mail.

This also seems appropriate. A letter is a tangible expression of appreciation. It’s less likely to be deleted unread than an email is. A letter can be personalized with a handwritten note by the Executive Director, a Board member, or someone you actually helped by making your donation.

But is it a good idea to combine the two? What about a thank-you letter that’s not delivered in an envelope with a stamp on it, but as an attachment to an email?

Attachment TY’s: pros and cons

This is the first year that an organization I support and value sent me a thank-you letter from the Executive Director in the form of a PDF. It was attached to a two-sentence email message from the Administrative Assistant.

I admit, as a donor, I was surprised and a bit miffed. As a consultant, I thought, “This is no way to treat a longtime, loyal donor. They are going to lose money doing this.”

But am I right?

I asked a sample of other nonprofit consultants and staff at organizations what they thought, and here are some of their reactions, pro and con:

I don’t know anyone doing this. Attachments are such an easy way to get caught in spam filters. And even if it showed up in my inbox, I would be very leery of opening it.

Ugh, I think that’s just not adequate. A paper thank you letter is the best option. An attached pdf just feels like the organization doesn’t care about the donor.

I have done that when instructed because we had no other contact information for the donor. I don’t like it and don’t think it’s optimal at all.

I just got one from an org for my donation. I think it’s great. I can slide it into my digital folder of donations. Saved paper and the stamp cost.

I would rather get one like that because I receive/keep all my other tax docs digitally.

Oh hello 2002, where have you been?! 😉😁 As …said, attachments are an easy to get blacklisted by servers. It’s also impersonal and a poor way to engage with donors.
Just this morning I received a mass “Dear Donor” email from an org I donated to last year (and a significant amount at that). My response: unsubscribe 😕
As a donor, I would MUCH rather have an electronic acknowledgment! I’m annoyed every year trying to keep track of letters like that.
I have seen both sides. I like getting it electronic because I too can save it to my tax files. I miss the personal connection from a hand signed TY, but get not all orgs can do that.
I haven’t seen this yet, but I see the pros and cons. I’d personally rather have the e-acknowledgement as well…I would think the best way to handle it (though probably too labor intensive for some orgs) would be to give donors the ability to opt into/out of electronic communications.
For the majority of our donors, we send emails with attached PDF tax acknowledgement letters. Major donors receive more personal outreach. We’ve only received positive feedback on this practice from our community!
As a donor, I am increasingly disliking thank you notes via USPS. I know that non-profit rates apply, but … wish they’d use the $ for other things in marketing/fundraising. And I really, really hate the use of 8×11 sheets of paper that are *empty* on the back side. Maybe shift to baronial size? And still use the back for info of some kind? (I know: I give away my PR person background and experience in basic design.) However, I’m really happy when I do get a hand-written note on a small notecard. And I know that the hand-written version doesn’t necessarily “work” for documentation that needs to go with an acknowledgement of donation regarding tax advice.
I’ve had it happen to me and I hate it as a donor. I don’t need or want the attachment. Put it in the body of your email.
I think there’s a generational (age) aspect to this and it will become more accepted over time. I share people’s concerns about the impersonality of email acknowledgements as well as spam filtering issues, but there is definitely a shift happening among donors.
Sending mail when you’re working from home is such a logistical nightmare. You need to drive somewhere to print off the letter, go find the person who needs to sign it, go to the post office….it would take me a whole morning to print cheques and get them in the mail last summer…
The less paper, the better. Harder for me to lose 🙂

How “attached” are you to paper thank-you’s?

As you can see, the professionals I asked are all over the map about whether it’s okay to send a thank-you as an email attachment–or whether you should crawl on your knees over cut glass to your office if necessary to mail it instead!

So, now I’m opening the poll to you! What do you think?

  1. Thank-you letters must go out by mail. No exceptions.
  2. Email attachments are fine with me!
  3. No attachments, but a thank-you in the body of the email is good.
  4. It depends on the organization.
  5. It depends on the donor.

What’s your opinion?

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