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Should You Write Like You Speak?

July 9, 2015 by Dennis Fischman 1 Comment

Writers often hear the advice, “Write like you speak.”  But is that good advice for bloggers?

YES: if it means you avoid jargon, write with your audience in mind, and reveal a bit of personality in your writing.

NO: if it means you blog without thought or effort.

If you’ve just flipped the lid on the top of your head and poured out whatever was top of mind at the moment, don’t expect me to read it.  If you haven’t worked at finding matter that will interest me and a way of expressing it that will draw me in, don’t waste my time…or yours.

Write (and revise, and write again) so that what you finally publish sounds like you’re speaking to me, directly, and telling me what I most need to hear.

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You CAN Be Too Brief

July 7, 2015 by Dennis Fischman 1 Comment

We’ve all heard the advice. Whether you’re blogging, tweeting, or writing a letter, shorter is better.  Right?

But it is possible to be too brief.  fresh fish sold here

The fishmonger looked up proudly at his new hand-painted sign.  “Fresh fish sold here,” it proclaimed.

A friend tapped him on the shoulder. “Nice sign, but it shouldn’t say ‘fresh'”, he advised.  “That makes people think about the possibility that it…might not be.”

The fishmonger took his paintbrush and painted over the “fresh.”

Another friend asked, “Why does it say ‘here’?  Where else would you be selling it?”

The fishmonger painted out the word “here.”

“Sold?” asked a third friend.  “Does anybody think you give your fish for free?”

One more swipe of the brush removed the ‘sold.’

A fourth friend scoffed, “Why say ‘fish’?  You can smell them a mile away!”

With a sigh, the fishmonger raised his brush and painted out the last word.

Don’t take well-meaning advice that doesn’t fit what you’re trying to say.  Go on as long as it takes to put your message across.  No more…but no less.

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Do You Know What You’re Writing About?

June 16, 2015 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

writing topic

How do you find your topic?

Articles have titles. Email appears under a subject line. Newsletters use headlines. Each is a way of answering the readers’ question, “What are you writing about?”

Answer that question well and your readers will stick with you. Leave them wondering and they toss that newsletter into the trash or hit that delete button on the keyboard.  You might as well never have written anything!

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Topic first

Knowing what you’re writing about–your topic–is the first order of business for your readers. But you, the writer, may start with a topic…or only discover it at the end.

Some people write on a schedule. (I publish my blog every Monday, Tuesday, and Thursday, for instance.) If you do, you will find it useful to have a communications calendar. Write down at least the general topic for each day, ahead of time. That way, when you sit down to write, you won’t be staring at a blank screen, waiting for inspiration to strike.

Plug the topic on your calendar into the title, subject line, or headline, and your readers will know what to expect. But you’ve made them a promise. After your first draft, check what you’ve written is what the title says it’s supposed to be!

Topic last

Whether or not you plan your writing ahead, sometimes you write something unexpected. Inspiration strikes, or a news item springs up suddenly that you just have to address.  In those cases, you may have a sense of what you want to say without yet knowing exactly the point you want to make.

I’d still suggest putting a general subject line or title at the head of the piece. Consider that a placeholder. Write your first draft to discover what it is you’re writing about. Then, and only then, settle on the topic you want to present to your reader–and go back and use that instead.

Topic best

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On average, your readers will take three seconds to decide whether to bother reading what you wrote. What can they see in three seconds?

  • Photos and captions
  • Text in bold
  • Subheadings, and, most of all…
  • Headline, subject line, or title

Make sure your readers can see what you’re talking about–and what’s in it for them. When you start writing, when you finish, or possibly both, take all the time you need to make that title sing.

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