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Fundraising Tuesday: Show Me You Care

April 5, 2016 by Dennis Fischman 1 Comment

careToday I received a letter in the mail from my health insurance company.

You are taking a certain medicine, they said, so every year, you should have a certain kind of blood test.  Are you doing that?  Will you ask your doctor to make sure?

The company called the letter a Care Alert, and everything inside it reinforced the message, “We Care.”

The envelope didn’t: it looked as if it might have been one of those Explanations of Benefits that don’t explain anything at all.  And of course, one of the reasons they care is that if I look out for myself, I can avoid serious health risks that would end up costing the insurance company a lot.

Still, the message itself was caring.  It was personalized, and it treated me like a responsible adult who can make good decisions with the proper information.

A Modest Proposal: Show You Care

I would like to propose that nonprofits aim at making all their communications as personal and as caring as the letter I received.

What would it take to do that?

  1. Knowing, and remembering, a lot about your supporters.
  2. Thinking, “How can I make my agency useful to this person?”  What topics matter to him or her?  What information would she or he find useful–not in a general way, but here and now?
  3. Calling on them to take action…and showing them how.

The tools exist to make all this possible.  Databases, constituent relationship management software and processes, email tools, various programs that remind you it’s time to send this kind of message to this specific person: they’re out there, and not that expensive.

But is your organization willing to spend the time and attention it takes to treating every client, constituent, prospect, or donor with at least as much care as a health insurance company showed to me?

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Fundraising Tuesday: The Key to a Good Appeal Letter

March 29, 2016 by Dennis Fischman 3 Comments

IWJ appeal letterA good appeal letter is not about the nonprofit organization.  It’s not even about the impact of its work.  It’s about the donor.

This appeal letter I received from Interfaith Worker Justice is not the ideal appeal letter–but it has one strong point.

The graphic says to the donor, “You are the key.”

The graphic stands out from the text.  It’s even more visible because the envelope bore the same graphic in the same color scheme.  My eye was trained to look for it before I opened the envelope.

“You are the key.”  That’s the message that made me, the donor, want to read the appeal letter, even though it could have been written much more effectively.  It’s also the message that makes a donor want to give.

How are you sending that message to your donors?

 

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Fundraising Tuesday: Get the Picture

March 8, 2016 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

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Photos make your appeal stand out

At the end of 2015, I went through all the appeal letters nonprofits had sent me. (Yes, yours too.) What I found was shocking.

People are becoming more visually oriented, and a photo helps your appeal stand out. Yet 40 of 90 letters I received were text only!

Another 24 included blurry black-and-white photos, or nice color photos that added nothing to the message.

What a wasted opportunity!

What a Photo Does for Your Fundraising Letter

Words matter–but only if people read them.

When a donor receives your letter, she takes about three seconds to decide whether to read it or throw it in the recycling. In three seconds, what can she see? Possibly:

  • Whether or not you called her by name
  • Text that jumps out at her because it’s bold
  • The first line of the letter
  • The postscript

invite meBut more than any of these, a photo with a caption invites the donor in.

<–See what I mean?

Time to Take the Photos

I’m a words guy. Like the candidate who shall not be named on this blog, I have good words. But they do my nonprofit no good if nobody reads them.

You have a camera in your pocket. Use it. Every week–every day, if possible–snap a photo or two that help your nonprofit organization tell its stories. Collect those photos in your storybank. When you write your fundraising letter, pick the photo first!

Then your fundraising letter will stand out like a penguin wearing shades. And your future will be bright.

 


Every Tuesday this season, I’m offering a tip on how to write better fundraising appeals. Find the rest of the series under Fundraising Tuesday.

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