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TY Thursday: What It Takes to Write a Great Thank-You Letter

June 2, 2016 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

bride writingDid you ever sit down to write a batch of thank-you letters and realize, “I don’t know who half of these people are”?

If you’ve gotten married recently, you might know what I mean. There are all those gifts from people who are friends of your parents. You might know them by name…or not. You might recognize their faces…or not.

But they wished you well and sent you a gift.

So you want to thank them. You want to appreciate their time, effort, and expense. But you end up writing a dozen, or two dozen, or a hundred letters that all sound the same. “Why am I doing this?” you think. “Will it make a difference to this person anyway?” And what should be a joy becomes a tiresome duty.

It’s a sad situation. It’s a situation that too many nonprofits find themselves in when they sit down to write thank-you letters to donors.

And it doesn’t have to be that way.

The 3 Things You Need to Write a Great TY

You can make writing a thank-you letter a joy if you prepare in advance. Here are the three things you need to have on hand before you write your TY (or record it on video).Continue Reading

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Thank-You Thursday: Many Thanks!

May 26, 2016 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Did you do a spring fundraising appeal? Are you sending out a lot of thank-you notes?   Here are some great tips on writing thank-yous that people will remember.

  1. Caryn Stein of Network for Good gives us 5 Rules for Thanking Donors.
  2. Pamela Grow shares A free thank you letter template you can swipe!
  3. Beth Ann Locke advises us, “Start with appreciation. End with thanks. And liberally sprinkle gratitude in between.” Find out how in Resolution 2014.
  4. Gail Perry of Fired-up Fundraising tells us How to Craft a Killer Thank-You Letter.
  5. I’d be silly not to mention my own article, The Ideal Thank-You Letter Went Out Today. (It’s the sequel to The Ideal Appeal Letter Begins With You.)

My friend Ann Green has it right: we should be thanking our donors all year long.  In fact, she suggests we set up thank-you calendars the same way we set up editorial calendars.  Now, there’s a resolution to keep in 2016!

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Fundraising Tuesday: How Well Do You Know Your Donors?

May 17, 2016 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Toyota hybrid alesman

(AP Photo/Shuji Kajiyama)

Who knows your donors better: you, or the companies that sell them cars?

My wife, Rona, was an early adopter of the Toyota Prius. She bought the first model the dealer ever had sitting on the lot. Every five years or so since then, she’s traded in and bought another Prius. And the dealer knows it.

The dealer doesn’t mail her in years 1, 2, or 3 after her purchase. But beginning in year 4, they start sending her teasers about how much she could get if she traded in now.

They don’t advertise Camrys to her. They don’t send her email about Highlanders or RAV4s. They talk to her about what they know she wants to buy–the new Prius–at the time when she’s most likely to buy it.

Does your nonprofit organization know your donors and their giving, the way Rona’s car dealer knows her buying habits?

When Your Donors Give

A lot of donors give once a year, in November or December. That may be because your organization only asks them once a year. I’ve suggested you should try asking for donations more often. See what happens!

But if you are among the one-third of nonprofit organizations who ask at least every few months, you don’t have to guess. You can look at your donor’s track record. If you’ve been sending Debbie Donor letters every season for three years, and Debbie only ever gives in September, does it really make sense to send her those other asks?

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Of course, what the donor is telling you may be, “I’ll give to your organization for general support once a year.” That means if you ask her for money at other times, it had better be for something special.

  • Does Debbie care about sending kids to summer camp? Then a letter in early June might do the trick.
  • Is she worried about low-income families freezing? If you’re in New England, February might not be too late for that kind of appeal.

What They Give For

How do you know what your donor cares about? You call and ask. You send surveys. You look for her name on the lists of donors to other organizations.

A little detective work will make sure you ask for donations when the donor is ready to give and for the good work he or she actually wants to support. You don’t have to promise to use the money exclusively for that purpose–but you do have to bring the results the donor wants to achieve to the top of your donor’s mind.

Otherwise, you’re peddling a truck to someone who wants a Prius.

 


Need help figuring out how to ask for donations at the right time, for the right cause? Email me, [email protected], to set up a free consultation. Because it’s more expensive to send out hundreds or thousands of appeal letters that don’t work than to get expert advice.

 

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