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The Worst End-of-Year Email of 2016

January 9, 2017 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Yes, Virginia, it is a good idea to follow up your wonderful end-of-year appeal letter with email. But not any old email will do.

Remember, the person receiving your email gets as many messages in their inbox as you do! And what do you do with the majority of those messages? You scroll past them…to find messages from people you actually want to hear from.

Remember Why You Send an End-of-Year Email

Your goal is not merely to raise money. It’s to become one of the people that they actually want to hear from. You want every message–including the “asks”–to make your donors feel happy to be on your list.

Unfortunately, I have seen too many end-of-year emails that do just the opposite.

End-of-Year Email that Might End the Relationship

The nonprofit says, “Help us meet our year-end goal.”

  • The donor thinks, “Why does that matter to me? The goal is just a number. So is the date. You may care about your goal, but why should I?”

The nonprofit says, “It’s not too late to make your tax-deductible donation in 2016.”

  • The donor thinks, “I don’t give because of the tax deduction. Sure, I’ll take it, because who wouldn’t accept a few dollars back on their taxes? But I need a reason to give to you.”

The nonprofit says, “We haven’t heard from you yet.”

  • The donor thinks, “Oh, you noticed, did you? Good. But what makes you think you can just expect me to give?”

Ending the Relationship Before It Begins

And here’s the opening line of the worst email my wife and I received in 2016.

  • Our records indicate you haven’t donated to the [name of organization] yet this year. We need you now more than ever!

Not only does this nonprofit take a stuffy tone with us (“our records show”). Not only does its email focus on what the organization needs and not what we, the donors, want to accomplish. To the best of our knowledge, Rona and I have never given to this organization before.

My more suspicious side says this nonprofit is trying to scam us into believing we just forgot to give. They’re like the magazines that tell you “It’s time to renew your subscription” when you never subscribed before. That’s ugly. Nonprofits can do better than that!

But let’s give them the benefit of the doubt. Maybe they sincerely can’t tell the difference between their longtime donors and their first-time prospects. To the donors, it doesn’t matter if the nonprofit is deceptive or incompetent. That nonprofit has lost our trust.

Want to Do Better? Let Me Help

It’s a new year, and it’s time to plan a communications strategy that will make your email the first thing your donors want to read.

Email me, [email protected], and let’s make 2017 better from the start–for you and your donors.

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TY Thursday: Call and Thank Your Donors

January 5, 2017 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

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Make a donor’s day. Call!

Sometimes the best thank-you letter a donor can get isn’t a letter. It’s a phone call.

Ideally, you’d do both. When the donation arrives, call and say, “You’ll be getting an official thank-you letter in a couple of days–but I wanted to call and thank you personally.”

Or, after you know the letter should have arrived, follow it up with a call. “I wanted to thank you again and tell you how much I appreciate your gift.”

What Calling to Say Thanks Does for Your Nonprofit

First off, you will feel great about talking to a donor.

Sure, there may be an awkward moment at the start of the call. The donor isn’t used to getting called out of the blue to be told “thank you.” (Sad,  but all too true!) She or he may be wary, thinking you’re about to ask for yet another gift.

When the donor realizes that you took the time to call just because they did a good thing and you want to acknowledge it, they are delighted. They may end up thanking you!

Second, you may learn more about the donor.

If you get a live person on the call and not a voicemail, they may be in the middle of something, or just not talkative. You respect their time, thank them, and move on. But if they seem open to conversation, then do what Tina Cincotti advises:

Say — “I don’t want to take up much of your time but would you be willing to share with me what inspired you to first give to ___________ (org name)?”

You can also ask things like:

  • Why does this cause matter to you?
  • What interests you most about our organization?
  • What expectations do you have of the organizations you support?
  • How often do you want to hear from us?
  • Would you like to be involved with us in other ways beyond being a donor?

(And don’t forget to make a note of what you hear, in your donor database!)

Third, even if you leave a voicemail, you build trust.

Your donor’s relationship with you follows a predictable path: first they get to know you, then they decide they like you, and finally they come to trust you. Leaving a personal message is a step along that path.

What all this adds up to is: your nonprofit makes more money!

According to Tom Ahern, first-time donors who get a personal thank you within 48 hours are 4x more likely to give a second gift. And you want that second gift, since donor retention rates skyrocket from 22.9% to 60.8%.

So, let’s see.

Don't call. That first-time donor never gives again. Call. They give and keep on giving. Share on X
Seems like a simple choice, doesn’t it?

That’s why Gail Perry says using the phone to thank donors is “highly profitable fundraising.” And Steven Shattuck of Bloomerang says you should call every new donor: no excuses!

How to Make a Thank-You Call

Who should call your donors? The best people to make those thank-you calls are Board members and volunteers. Like the donor, they have given time or money, or both, because they care about the organization and its mission. They reinforce the donor’s decision to give, because they are other people “just like you” who give.

Should your callers follow a script? They should have a script (and look at the Gail Perry and Tina Cincotti links above for examples. But they should feel free to adapt it so it sounds like their own voice. That’s particularly important when leaving voicemail. If the donor thinks it’s a sales call, she or he will hang up before hearing your gratitude. A conversational tone of voice can keep them listening.

How long should you stay on the phone? That depends entirely on the donor. If the reaction you hear is, “Oh, that’s so nice! Thank you, goodbye,” don’t try to extend the conversation. If the donor is willing to have a conversation with you, so much the better. If you reach voicemail, say what you mean to say, slowly, with feeling, and that is that.

Thank-You Calls to Mobile Phones

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I’m a baby boomer. Most donors are my age or older, and we’re used to getting phone calls on our land lines (or what we used to call just “the phone”).

Increasingly, though, Generations X and Y are starting to give…and increasingly, the mobile phone is the only phone they have. On mobile phones, it’s a nuisance to see that you’ve missed a call, go to voicemail, and play it back. So, leaving voicemail on mobile is not effective: few people are picking it up.

The etiquette among younger donors is that if you call them and they recognize the caller, it’s up to them to call back. (If they don’t, then it’s your problem!) So how do you use the phone to thank a donor who’s mobile?

Text them. At least, that’s what a mobile phone expert told our friends at Blue Avocado. Actually, he advised matching the channel of the thank-you to the channel of the gift.

If someone makes a donation as a result of a text, text them right away with a thank you. A day or two later, send another thank you by email so they get two thanks. If they donated as a result of an email, send them a thank-you email right away, and then follow it up with a snail mail thank you.
What’s your experience thanking donors? What works best for you?

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TY Thursday: Don’t Take Your Donors for Granted

December 27, 2016 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

shut up, give me moneySometimes I think nonprofits have an invisible sign above their desks, directed to donors:

“Shut up and give.”

How else do you explain the way we keep on writing donors the way that’s most convenient for us, and not for them?

Or the way we persist in asking them for a new donation before we’ve actually said “thank you” for the old one?

For more shake-your-head proof that we are taking donors for granted–treating them like cash machines and not like human beings–consider this pet peeve from my friend Carol.

A First-Time Gift is Not a Wedding Ring

Carol read last week’s blog and wrote me:

I had an experience of giving generously to an organization and then realizing that my impulse was one of very poor judgment in terms of my financial situation.  Subsequent mail from the organization has basically asked me where I am and to send money in the same amount as soon as possible as the funds are very much needed.  Very poor form! I have been tempted to send a note but have decided that silence is the better option.

From the organization’s point of view, it seems, they’ve been jilted. Carol made them a vow of lifelong devotion, and then she left them at the altar.

But Carol doesn’t see it that way. She made a gift. Did that commit her to making the same gift happily ever after? Certainly not–particularly if she couldn’t really afford it. And she is offended that the organization is holding her to a promise she never made.

I bet you have some Carols on your list of lapsed donors. They, too, have decided “silence is the better option.” You might feel they have abandoned you, but they believe you have a lot of nerve to think they owe you.

How Not to Take Donors for Granted

Fortunately, some of us do understand how to woo our donors. Carol adds:

A different organization with similar goals has been nothing but kind and appreciative. After getting a request following my increased donation amount to another arm of the organization, I noted that I already donate to that program and had just increased the amount.  I received a note to the effect that the mistake had been corrected, with thanks for my being of such support. 

This is also a group that initiated a meeting for me with a regional director after I was unable to attend a local event for which I had registered. We had a lovely dinner with pleasant conversation, including an update on several programs–no pressure of any kind, just a learning experience and a getting to know you evening.  One certainly catches more flies with honey and the personal touch.

Taking donors for granted is destroying their good will. Treating your donors right is the best thank-you. What are you doing to make your donors feel they’ve truly been thanked?

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