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Fundraising Tuesday: What’s Your Campaign Story?

January 19, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

As Inauguration Day approaches, I think about the last two presidential elections. They had very different results–possibly because of the stories the campaigns told.

what happened coverAfter the disaster in 2016, both presidential candidate Hillary Rodham Clinton and seasoned campaign manager and Democratic National Committee operative Donna Brazile put books out trying to explain what happened. Too late!

 

campaign biographyLooking back at elections can teach us something, but there’s an equally if not more interesting kind of book to read: the kind that’s published before the election.

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Campaign stories that worked

Barack Obama’s The Audacity of Hope was a brilliant example. It told the story of who he was and made that the story of what we, the voters, wanted to see. It won him donations, volunteers, votes. It helped make him President.

Joe Biden’s Promise Me, Dad: A Year of Hope, Hardship, and Purpose focused on his family, and especially, the tragedies that they suffered. It turned the former Vice President from an Obama era afterthought to a candidate people could identify with. It helped make him President.

Kamala Harris book cover

The Truths We Hold: An American Journey introduced Senator Kamala Harris to an audience outside California. It has not made her President–yet–but it helped many more people get to know, like, and trust her, and what she stands for. It probably helped make her Vice President.

There’s an election campaign going on, and your nonprofit organization is one of the candidates.

You’re competing for volunteer time.  You’re competing for donor money.

Everyone in your community can choose from a slate of good causes and “cast their vote”–for you, for a similar organization, or for a completely different cause that also appeals to them.

You need name recognition to win.  No one will vote for you if they don’t know who you are.  But how do you make sure people hear about you, and remember your name?

Tell stories.

Tell stories that dramatize the problem you’re trying to solve.

Tell stories that give people hope that there are solutions.

Give them a chance to be the hero of the story by giving you their time or money.

When they choose between you and other organizations, make sure they know your name.  Then you’ll have a chance to get their vote.

Happy Inauguration Day 2021.

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TY Thursday: Can an Email Attachment Really be a Thank-You?

January 14, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Email attachmentDoes an attachment to an email message take the place of a thank-you letter?

When you give money to causes you support, often the nonprofit sends you a response by email right away.

This seems appropriate. The nonprofit wants to go beyond the impersonal receipt that automatically goes out when you give online. They want you to know as soon as possible not just that my gift was received, but that it was appreciated. That’s part of how they hope to win your loyalty as a donor!

When you give, you often receive a thank-you letter in the mail.

This also seems appropriate. A letter is a tangible expression of appreciation. It’s less likely to be deleted unread than an email is. A letter can be personalized with a handwritten note by the Executive Director, a Board member, or someone you actually helped by making your donation.

But is it a good idea to combine the two? What about a thank-you letter that’s not delivered in an envelope with a stamp on it, but as an attachment to an email?

Attachment TY’s: pros and cons

This is the first year that an organization I support and value sent me a thank-you letter from the Executive Director in the form of a PDF. It was attached to a two-sentence email message from the Administrative Assistant.

I admit, as a donor, I was surprised and a bit miffed. As a consultant, I thought, “This is no way to treat a longtime, loyal donor. They are going to lose money doing this.”

But am I right?

I asked a sample of other nonprofit consultants and staff at organizations what they thought, and here are some of their reactions, pro and con:

I don’t know anyone doing this. Attachments are such an easy way to get caught in spam filters. And even if it showed up in my inbox, I would be very leery of opening it.

Ugh, I think that’s just not adequate. A paper thank you letter is the best option. An attached pdf just feels like the organization doesn’t care about the donor.

I have done that when instructed because we had no other contact information for the donor. I don’t like it and don’t think it’s optimal at all.

I just got one from an org for my donation. I think it’s great. I can slide it into my digital folder of donations. Saved paper and the stamp cost.

I would rather get one like that because I receive/keep all my other tax docs digitally.

Oh hello 2002, where have you been?! 😉😁 As …said, attachments are an easy to get blacklisted by servers. It’s also impersonal and a poor way to engage with donors.
Just this morning I received a mass “Dear Donor” email from an org I donated to last year (and a significant amount at that). My response: unsubscribe 😕
As a donor, I would MUCH rather have an electronic acknowledgment! I’m annoyed every year trying to keep track of letters like that.
I have seen both sides. I like getting it electronic because I too can save it to my tax files. I miss the personal connection from a hand signed TY, but get not all orgs can do that.
I haven’t seen this yet, but I see the pros and cons. I’d personally rather have the e-acknowledgement as well…I would think the best way to handle it (though probably too labor intensive for some orgs) would be to give donors the ability to opt into/out of electronic communications.
For the majority of our donors, we send emails with attached PDF tax acknowledgement letters. Major donors receive more personal outreach. We’ve only received positive feedback on this practice from our community!
As a donor, I am increasingly disliking thank you notes via USPS. I know that non-profit rates apply, but … wish they’d use the $ for other things in marketing/fundraising. And I really, really hate the use of 8×11 sheets of paper that are *empty* on the back side. Maybe shift to baronial size? And still use the back for info of some kind? (I know: I give away my PR person background and experience in basic design.) However, I’m really happy when I do get a hand-written note on a small notecard. And I know that the hand-written version doesn’t necessarily “work” for documentation that needs to go with an acknowledgement of donation regarding tax advice.
I’ve had it happen to me and I hate it as a donor. I don’t need or want the attachment. Put it in the body of your email.
I think there’s a generational (age) aspect to this and it will become more accepted over time. I share people’s concerns about the impersonality of email acknowledgements as well as spam filtering issues, but there is definitely a shift happening among donors.
Sending mail when you’re working from home is such a logistical nightmare. You need to drive somewhere to print off the letter, go find the person who needs to sign it, go to the post office….it would take me a whole morning to print cheques and get them in the mail last summer…
The less paper, the better. Harder for me to lose 🙂

How “attached” are you to paper thank-you’s?

As you can see, the professionals I asked are all over the map about whether it’s okay to send a thank-you as an email attachment–or whether you should crawl on your knees over cut glass to your office if necessary to mail it instead!

So, now I’m opening the poll to you! What do you think?

  1. Thank-you letters must go out by mail. No exceptions.
  2. Email attachments are fine with me!
  3. No attachments, but a thank-you in the body of the email is good.
  4. It depends on the organization.
  5. It depends on the donor.

What’s your opinion?

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Fundraising Tuesday: The Ideal Email Appeal

January 12, 2021 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

When it comes to raising money, letters in the mail (and thank-you’s in the mail) still rule. But email is coming in a close second.

Part of that is the moment. As I write this, the pandemic is still raging in the United States, and Donald Trump is still President of the United States–and for both those reasons, the post office has been strained beyond belief.

Part of it is generational. There are more donors now who grew up always using email. (Indeed, there are some for whom email is passe, and they will let hundreds of messages pile up in their inbox while at least looking at every text message they receive on their phone.)

And part of the reason email is becoming more important is that email and postal mail are not competitors. To reach your donors, get their attention, and move them to give, you need both!

Both is good

The Ideal Email Appeal

You have already seen the ideal appeal letter and the ideal thank-you letter on this blog. Now, I’d like to share what I consider to be the ideal email appeal. (Once again, I tip my hat to alert reader Joan Hill!)

From: Brendan Colthurst <[email protected]>
Date: Tue, Dec 29, 2020, 11:31 AM
Subject: You helped us tell stories no one else wants to tell
To: Joan Hill

Joan, I want to share a couple of important videos our video team here at RAICES made this year, acknowledge the importance of telling stories no one else is telling, and ask you for a donation of $65 to help make sure we can continue to tell these stories and fight for immigrant human rights.

BLACK IMMIGRANT LIVES

In the summer, one of our videos made a splash, with millions of views, tens of thousands of shares, and write-ups in major publications: Our Black Immigrant Lives are Under Attack video and accompanying article. In the video we lay out horrifying fact after horrifying fact about a US immigration system that is both terrorizing and undeniably worse for Black immigrants. We believe everyone needs to know what is happening to Black immigrants in the United States.

Black immigrant

DACA

On DACA, we brought you a series of videos to both explain the legal technicalities…

Defend DACA

…and to meet DACA recipients who have been caught in the crosshairs.

DACA recipients

CELEBRATING WINS

We celebrated a moment of pure joy watching Cameroonian asylum seeker Stephane reunite with his sister after a decade apart. Like the majority of asylum seekers, he was cruelly trapped in detention for months, even though his family was waiting for him with a safe home. Thankfully our RAICES Bond Program was able to get him out.

Asylum seeker

We believe that if all Americans truly knew how America treats its immigrant community members, they’d fight like hell for immigrant human rights just like we do. That’s why we tell the stories no one else is telling.

DONATE

Whether you are giving today, already support us, or are giving in other ways, thank you. Our mission requires solidarity, vigilance, and a strong community of supporters who stand up and fight whenever and wherever human rights abuses occur.

Thank you for standing with us,
Brendan Colthurst
Chief Technology Officer
RAICES

RAICESTEXAS.ORG

EIN 74-2436920

RAICES
1305 N. Flores
San Antonio, TX 78212
United States

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Why It Works

This email from RAICES does well at every turn.

  • The “From:” line tells you it’s in the name of a single, real person.
  • The “Subject:” line you that YOU made a real difference, and how. (It also promises stories, and everyone likes to hear those!)
  • Emotional language engages the reader.
  • The email asks for money early and often, so if Joan doesn’t end up reading the whole email she may still give.
  • The Donate links are prominent and visible.
  • The photos and videos break up the “wall of text” and add visual interest to keep the reader interested. And the links lead to pages that include a call to give to RAICES.

Could this email be a little on the long side? Perhaps–if Joan weren’t already a committed supporter.

But the nonprofit knew who Joan was–she’s in their database–and they pitched their appeal to her personally. I’d bet money they sent a different email to first-time donors, and a different one to prospects!

The Next Time You Ask, Use Email

If you are not asking for money by email yet, please take some tips from this example, and start! Don't give up on postal mail, because that would be a disaster for your bottom line. But using both, in tandem, would be ideal. Share on X

 

 

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