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Fundraising Tuesday: Using Your Database to Get the Name Right

November 17, 2020 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

My wife’s name is Rona. My name is Dennis.

There is no one at our household whose name is “Mr. Rona Dennis.”

Yet that is the person the United Way is asking for money.

Why it’s crucial to get the name right

no recyclingAs a nonprofit fundraiser, when I see a mistake like the one the United Way made, I shudder. Why? Because I know that the average donor will see that envelope and throw it away.

If you mail an envelope to the wrong name, it's like mailing it to the wrong address. It will never be seen. Share on X

People’s names matter to them. It’s vital to get the name right. If you mess up on the name, you are saying to the donor, “I have no idea who you are, and I don’t care. You don’t matter to me: only your check.”

In fact, your nonprofit needs to know not only the donor’s name, but what they like to be called. Am I Mr. Dennis Fischman? Dennis Fischman? Dennis? Or something else?

Even a dear friend letter will get tossed, unread. But that’s presuming the donor has actually opened the envelope to see the salutation. If the name on the envelope is wrong, whoosh! Into the recycling bin it goes, no matter if you wrote the ideal appeal letter and tucked it inside.

How to make sure you get the name right

The best way to know what the person likes to be called is to ask. Then, you have to make sure to enter the correct information into the database. But you have to enter it into the correct fields, too.

Look again at what the United Way did. I’d bet they meant to place “Rona” in a Donor 1 field and “Dennis” in a Donor 2. Or else, they meant to put “Rona and Dennis” in the First Name field and “Fischman” in the last name. (It depends how their database is set up.)

Instead, though, someone put “Rona” in the First Name, then skipped to the next field, Last Name, and put “Dennis.” They didn’t double-check, and they didn’t ask themselves where “Fischman” was supposed to go. Enter the street address, city, state, and zip. On to the next set of data to enter!

You can do better than that.

Just take an extra moment before you save the entry to double-check it.

Otherwise, the recycle bin is waiting!

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Fundraising Tuesday: How to Ensure Donors Read Your Letter

June 23, 2020 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Yes, you can raise funds this summer.

I’ve been showing you how asking for donations in the middle of a pandemic and an uprising against racism is actually doing your donors a favor. One of the things donors want most in times like these is the feeling of making a difference, and you can give that to them! (If you don’t, other nonprofits will.)

I’ve also been explaining how to raise funds even if your nonprofit works on issues that have very little relation to Covid-19 or to murders of Black people and other people of color by police. Take the A-B-C approach to fundraising: Acknowledge the crises. Be responsive. Continue to pursue your mission.

 

 

 

 

Direct mail works–better than asking by email, and much better than fundraising online. Sure, the best approach is a multichannel fundraising campaign. But it all comes back to the letter. And job #1 is to make sure the donor actually reads it!

So, how do you give the donor everything she needs to want to open and read your fundraising appeal?

Here’s how to make sure that letter you worked so hard to write gets read:

Envelopes Make Donors Want to Open Your Mail.

Once your donor opens the envelope, the postscript is the most important part of your appeal letter. (So important that here are four more ways to use postscripts!)

If you want a donor to read your letter, “Dear Friend” won’t cut it. Get their name right.

“But how do I know what the donor likes to be called?” Ask their name.

Use photos that tell the story.

Ms. Marvel hero

How your donor should see herself

Tell stories in words, too! And be sure to make the donor the hero of the story.

Follow these six steps and donors will be intrigued by the envelope, attracted by the letter, moved by the story, and motivated to give.

 

 

 

 

 

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Fundraising Tuesday: Envelopes Make Donors Want to Open Your Mail

January 14, 2020 by Dennis Fischman Leave a Comment

Did you get a lot of requests for donations in the mail last year? So did I. I just held a ruler up to the stack of mail that arrived in November and December of 2019. It was more than six inches worth of paper.

envelopes

Taller than a coffee cup. For sure. But more powerful?

The power of the nonprofit message all depends on whether we choose to open the envelope.

Direct Mail is You Against the World

Piles of envelopes coming through the mail: at home, we are used to that. As donors ourselves, we may have a routine: open the mail next to the recycling bin and pitch, pitch, pitch. Save that one for later. Pitch, pitch, pitch.

That includes the organizations we love and the organizations we’ve never heard of. The appeal letters are mixed in with the bills and the marketing mail. It’s all just a mass of paper, and the more we throw into the bin, the more we win.

We know that when we are at home, thinking like donors. But as soon as we get to the office, we forget it. Our nonprofit is so special, and its work is so important. Donors must be dying to see, open, and read everything we send them. Right?

Wrong. Our appeal letters are part of the pile, and it’s our direct mail against letters from everybody else in the world–until we do something that makes donors want to read them. Often, that’s the envelope.

Envelopes that Welcome Donors In

Statistically, one of the best ways to get your mail to stand out from the pack is to send it in an oversized envelope. Whether that’s a full sheet of paper or a greeting card size, it immediately calls attention to itself.

Oversized envelopes

As you can see, some of these envelopes use graphics to differentiate themselves, too. That’s even more important if you’re sending appeal letters in regular business-sized envelopes. An envelope with graphics…

Envelopes with graphics

..or an envelope that IS a graphic!

Envelope, all graphic

With or without a drawing or photo on the front, some envelopes beg to be opened because they have a compelling message there. United Farm Workers warns “Workers hung out to dry.” Don’t you want to open the envelope to find out what that mean, and what you can do about it?

In These Times magazine says, in bright red script letters, “Help the press protect democracy.” (They also used a colorful first-class stamp, which catches the eye–and is known to get a better result than a nonprofit imprint.)

What did your nonprofit do in 2019 to make sure your envelope would get opened?

What will you do in 2020, now that you’ve looked at these examples?

 

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